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Unshakable.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 06:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I got a bleed in my brain
A steady drip of crimson rain
Like a valley draped in heavy skies
I've got thunderstorms inside my eyes
Streaming as I lay screaming
Teardrops, so many teardrops
How can I die before my heart stops?
Before I can no longer cry
Until this temple of flesh runs dry
I'm holding myself together
Touching past the surface of forever
Waiting for the connections to sever
But nothing seems to break me
Nothing seems to shake me from you
Neither distance or hate can change the path of fate
Even in death, I will wait patiently at the gate
Angels and demons transcend the meaning of this
I'd crawl to hell and back just to remember your kiss
What your fingertips felt like upon my skin
But the hands of time have raped my mind and everything within
Now I'm broken, bruised and covered in your sin
And yet it feels so good...
To know that nothing will ever sway me from loving you.
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2009-06-29 18:57:57]
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Re: Unshakable.
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 11:17:02 AM AEST
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| I like how you have a certain style that is reflected in all of your poems --sets them apart from others. Your poems seems very sincere. |
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Re: Unshakable.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 05:45:46 PM AEST
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| I love the imagery of this poem!! |
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