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Writer's Frustration
Contributed by
LaureLouise
on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 04:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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As my hands rip the paper
Another sheet of my soul is torn.
What part of me
Demands this self mutilation?
It is my eyes!
See how they flow at the sight of
Words once so adored?
It must be my brain
That has now deemed its own thoughts
Worthy of execution.
No, it is my heart,
Who, upon reading the words it
Bled onto that blank page,
Has decided the spilled emotion
Far too inadequate to continue
Beyond this room.
EDIT: Or, is it "this room" which is in fact hindering my ability to produce language deserving enough to find a place on my page?
Copyright ©
LaureLouise
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2009-06-29 16:29:53]
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Re: Writer's Frustration
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by Bleedthelove on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 07:00:27 PM AEST
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Re: Writer's Frustration
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 07:34:09 PM AEST
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Great poem. You capture the true essence of writer's block in beautiful poetic form.
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