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~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 03:13:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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~~xXx~~
I’ve been thinking all day of nothing else but you,
Thinking of the love that is shared between us two.
Dreaming of the moments we will be together tonight,
Sharing a passion that can be nothing but right.
Come walk with me now alone on the beach,
I need you tonight, just within my reach.
My body yearns for your gentle touch,
My lips want to please you so very much.
I can’t wait to feel your hands in mine,
To imagine your lips on my own, so divine.
I’d love it if you took your tongue for a walk
Cause you won’t need it tonight to talk.
Let’s make love under the pale moonlight,
Then relax in each other’s arms under stars so bright.
Show me just what I mean to you, my sweet,
And I will do the same when on this beach we meet.
~~xXx~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2009-06-29 15:13:07]
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 04:35:06 PM AEST
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| Woo-hoo!!! Too cool. Me likes, Jenni. :-) |
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 05:17:01 PM AEST
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Very arousing write Jenni. Great job.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 08:35:33 PM AEST
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Ouie hot, hot, hot.
Better hope someone don't swat that fly.
good one.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 08:58:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. It captures the intensity of romance. I want to take my love to the beach right now! Great Job!
Heidi |
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 09:45:07 PM AEST
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| All poems seem to have one classic line, or a few entwined words that make it special....but your line "I’d love it if you took your tongue for a walk , Cause you won’t need it tonight to talk" is one of the classics of all time LMGDAO. You are one sick chick...and i love it!! |
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:08:57 PM AEST
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| very nice! I like the lust and desire in this piece. great write! |
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Re: ~Erotic Thoughts Of You~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 02:52:09 PM AEST
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absolutely sooo romantic and beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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