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Iron Sundial
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 08:32:54 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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Rusty metal clock
Measures shadows on a face
With tactile numbers.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-06-29 08:32:54]
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Re: Iron Sundial
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 03:20:57 PM AEST
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i am impressed by this haiku, i loved it very much, there is something so ancient and mysterious about a sundial and youve truly encapsulated that here in such a short piece, a host of imagery burst out of the words!!!1
fantastic stuff keep it up!! |
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Re: Iron Sundial
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 03:47:11 PM AEST
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Great haiku.. I have to agree with Zenith...
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Re: Iron Sundial
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by elle on
Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 11:36:34 PM AEST
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