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holy
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 09:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Fate handed a thread
I sat holding unraveled
peace in soul-heart
spinning round look
otherwise weaves
throughout diving
through unraveled
piece floated loose
a way opening me
to study to touch
to seek to signify
numberless worlds
lifetimes one drop
a chasm brink leap
so...mend the cloth
reverence masks
broken off & still
on the ground
soul-heart shudders
threads whip their
shrieking lines
listening there I
slapped by Fate's
hand bloodied ink
felt awe frozen
impressions
faces floating
stream of words
boiling vapor
wounding I
turned back
unraveled
peace/piece.
ming
6-28-09
11:20 AM
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-06-28 09:33:49]
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Re: holy
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by Scribbles on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 03:40:03 PM AEST
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| Yeah, I can't write like this but love reading it. |
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Re: holy
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 04:16:04 PM AEST
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Truly a beautiful piece. You are quite the poet. I consider this work a piece of art to treasure. Thanks for sharing it.
Heidi |
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Re: holy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 05:37:53 PM AEST
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very nice, very spontaneous.
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