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ABC (not quite)
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Scribbles
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Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 12:42:06 AM in AEST
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'Your future lies behind you
Your memories wait ahead
And all I ever told you
Was what I never said
My lies were always honest
The truth was often not
And everything I gave you
Was half of what you got.'
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2009-06-27 00:42:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ABC (not quite)
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST (User
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Intriguing. This opens doors usually not seen. peace. elle |
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Re: ABC (not quite)
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 09:26:55 AM AEST (User
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Out of the blue is quiet a wonderful place to gather poems. :) And it would make a nice title arranged a little differently...like this, 'out of blue' or 'blue out' otherwise too much of a cliche. |
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Re: ABC (not quite)
(User Rating: 1 ) by windowguy on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 02:17:33 PM AEST (User
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Sounds like you've been stuck in a parallel universe and got mixed up in the whole "space/time continuum thing"...
Or, was is "Alice in Wonderland" all over again???
Interesting read though. |
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Re: ABC (not quite)
(User Rating: 1 ) by simsalabim on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST (User
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very inspirational...
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Re: ABC (not quite)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 06:14:27 AM AEST (User
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Inspiring! Remember, only lies have to make sense. |
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