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fond spirit
Contributed by
elle
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Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 01:21:07 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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pink mimoso sprig
gentle scent of paradise
soft entrancing silk
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-06-26 13:21:07]
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Re: fond spirit
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 01:28:26 PM AEST
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They say a picture paints a thousand words. With ten words you have painted a thousand amazing paintings. Very well done Elle.
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Re: fond spirit
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by micka on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 03:13:28 PM AEST
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| short but exceptionally sweet, |
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Re: fond spirit
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 06:24:18 PM AEST
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A scenic piece of writing.
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Re: fond spirit
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by windowguy on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 11:53:22 AM AEST
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| Lovely image. Great choice of words. |
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Re: fond spirit
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by Lele on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 07:35:25 PM AEST
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As a true hai-ku (or as I say hai-kai) can be written, a short and powerful nature image and multi sensitive poetry. This is the rule of hai-kai in japonese culture.
congratulations, elle.
Bye, bye.
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Re: fond spirit
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 06:38:55 PM AEST
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| Yes ! ! ! |
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