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Lost Key
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 12:21:14 PM in AEST
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Lost Key
I tried to look into the keyhole to help you with your plight
I was quickly blinded by the magnificent light
The key that you are searching for
I found was taped right on the door
Slowly I turned the shiny gold key
Revealing the hidden beauty for the world to see
Inside no darkness did I find; not even a hint of shade
With the friends you have assembled here, you have got it made
Deadwriter
06/26/2009
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Re: Lost Key
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 12:33:34 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It has a great flow. It is a perfect reply and continuation to my poem. I love the posItive ending! I have met many positive people on this site. You are definitely one of them.
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Re: Lost Key
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 02:39:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: Lost Key
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 10:10:45 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. |
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Re: Lost Key
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 12:17:09 PM AEST
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| Positive sentiments written for and about poets. Nice. |
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