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[Never thought she was [Beautiful] eyes]
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 12:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Beautiful eyes
he doesn't see the same
"Do you love me naked?" she whispers
Every woman's the same, He says
Hurt me.
Beautiful eyes cries inside
feeling abstract, tragic
His actions sting against her heart
the little things
Hurt me.
Beautiful eyes
wanted to know she was cherished
wanted to feel like he'd die without her
the truth
Hurt me.
Beautiful eyes
remembers how it feels to be inadequate
so imperfect, so damaged
All of these destructive thoughts
Hurt me
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2009-06-26 12:14:08]
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Re: [Never thought she was [Beautiful] eyes]
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th June 2009 @ 05:04:02 PM AEST
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This one cuts deep. This bit is especially good:
Beautiful eyes cries inside
feeling abstract, tragic
it conveys the distress wonderfully.
-Phil |
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Re: [Never thought she was [Beautiful] eyes]
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 08:48:07 PM AEST
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I immediately thought "he's an a******".
Anyway, I can soooooooooooo feel the pain in this one. Nice style. Keep it up! |
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