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Afterlife
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
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Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 12:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Drifting through the twilight
Fading from sight
following the light
pleasent growing euphoria
loving embrace of a mothers grasp envelops
you float between the haze
under bright warming gaze
lost in a swirling maze
out of human touch
but there hand you clutch
what a day to end the start
and the sun rises
something good is going to happen
but when
let go
now
time to die
as the ether approaches
an entity you fly
subtle dignified
beautiful
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fortunesdancer
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2009-06-25 12:14:42]
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Re: Afterlife
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 06:47:03 PM AEST
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Nice write. Gentle and flowing.
Deadwriter
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Re: Afterlife
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 09:12:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. It shows that death is a natural process that should not be dreaded. Great flow!
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