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Happy Birthday
Contributed by
Fudge
on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Happy birthday Kim,
You're all on your own,
Unfamiliar home and work,
You're so all alone.
Happy birthday Kim,
Cat's just been in a fire.
You lost your boyfriend and your
"Best friend" turned out to be a liar.
Happy birthday Kim,
Luke is so far away,
You've got no one here,
You're always lonely every day.
Happy birthday Kim,
No presents to unwrap,
Your family's 600km's away,
Now what do you think of that?
Happy birthday Kim,
You've put on some weight,
Your hair is full of split ends
And your health is not so great.
Happy birthday Kim,
You locked your keys in your car today.
You must've felt pretty dumb,
Now what do you have to say?
Happy birthday Kim,
Remember last year's pressy?
It wasn't something bought at a store,
It was your first baby.
Happy birthday Kim,
What's those tears running down your face?
It's not all that bad you know,
You're only second place.
Copyright ©
Fudge
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2003-03-28 19:45:00]
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:58:44 AM AEST
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| this is such an excellent poem, i'm glad you wrote it two years ago, its the sort of situation we all find ourselves in at times, the car keys just tops it off, hope you arre feeling muh better in your life now paul |
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by Fudge on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 05:36:07 AM AEST
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| hello paul. it was a case of wrong place wrong time, especially when my birthday before that was a major screw-up too! but that's life. thanks for commenting :) |
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Re: Happy Birthday
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:43:30 PM AEST
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soo sad. great write
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