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Gentle Suicide
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 03:24:43 AM in AEST
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lay on my back i stare at the sky,
at the gentle clouds as the pass by,
little white plumes in the sky so blue,
i imagine shapes and dream of you.
the warm hot sun it burns my skin,
i feel the heat from deep within,
but the cold blue sky turns into grey,
the sun is cold and fades away.
i look up at the rooftiles of the ward so bleak,
i hear the heart monitor and its infernal beep.
the medic rush to save my life,
that i tried to end with this razor shap knife.
the coats of doctors are the faded white,
just like my heart as i give up the fight.
slowly do i drift away
into the dust of another day.
into a meadow i do run,
i feel the gentle breeze and the beating sun.
i am truely one with me,
i've lost my pain
and its set me free.
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2009-06-25 03:24:43]
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Re: Gentle Suicide
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by elle on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 07:19:17 PM AEST
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| so sad. . . nicely done. elle |
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Re: Gentle Suicide
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by micka on
Friday, 26th June 2009 @ 03:10:33 PM AEST
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| i love the poem, whats the inspiration, and is it really a happy ending? |
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