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Butterflies
Contributed by
windowguy
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Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 12:12:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Fine wafer thin flakes
Of a rainbow, delight eyes
With pretty ballets.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-06-25 00:12:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 06:55:26 AM AEST (User
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Perfectly beautiful Haiku! |
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Re: Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 06:56:19 AM AEST (User
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Fantastic Haiku!!! peace. elle |
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Re: Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 09:34:04 AM AEST (User
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sweet butterflies r the best part of life, because u want to be one. thats why i adore this poem. |
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Re: Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 01:05:03 PM AEST (User
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This is very lovely...
Love the idea of the ballet...
Jenni |
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Re: Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 08:21:28 PM AEST (User
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What a beautiful poem! Your exquisite choice of words captures the butterfly's true elegance. I am a big fan of your poetry!
--Heidi |
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