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hunger strike
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 12:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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you can not feed me
with your brutality
cruelness
without necessity
eyes of a creature
loveless. . .
bleeding love endlessly
I starve
in bruised deprivaty
bone thin
stasis. . .
invisible
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-06-24 12:10:23]
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Re: hunger strike
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 01:14:35 PM AEST
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You my friend are a master of your craft. Another great write.
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Re: hunger strike
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 02:38:38 PM AEST
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| Great write. Your word choice is perfect! |
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Re: hunger strike
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 08:04:12 PM AEST
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A great, painful write Elle. You're very good in your use of words.
Hope you're doing well my friend
Tim |
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Re: hunger strike
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th June 2009 @ 06:40:58 PM AEST
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| Wow, powerful and powerfully sad. :-( |
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