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Ambiguous love letters
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 03:37:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Flower
soft hair
coconut breeze
tease me
lips. mouth
Star
Sunshine
Drunk on life
your virtue
Photograph my diamond
hourglass
I'll let you be the time
footsteps in the sand
paper hearts enclosed in my hand.
Daisy dreams
Sweet melancholy
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-06-23 15:37:12]
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Re: Ambiguous love letters
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lele on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 06:27:26 PM AEST
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This poem just can be interpreted. When I read it, I've imagined a man and a woman in a beach, having a date or a honey moon. How I did get in this conclusion? By reading the words as a analogic metaphor, associating all caracteristic of the objects described (bright, good smell and taste, beautiful outlook and warmful places as beaches) as bringing kind, pleasure and love - things connected with a love's perspective.
good abstract and love poem.
Bye, bye.
Leandro Monteiro
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Re: Ambiguous love letters
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 04:22:41 AM AEST
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it was dreamy, cascading loveliness. The imagery was dulcet and the words were caressing. A quite lovely read. it leaves the audience applauding and craving for more...
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