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Watch You Leave

Contributed by drummerchic18 on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 09:33:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I can feel the air grow cold
and the knowing of whats going to be
i can taste the blood in my tears
because i know whats coming
For the first time in a long while i felt half-complete.
You showed me that i wasnt so bad after -all
That i was fine, just as me.
Now I can stare into your bright green eyes and i see nothing there
We've grown apart due the the walls forced between our hearts
you were my best friend
and as all the best friends i've had before
Im losing you just the same
I was suppose to take you away from the wretched place
was going to give you a home so that you could be free
but its all turning on me.
Im fighting for my life
and frightened because i dont know how i will survive.
Circumstance rage thru the air
they are out of my control
but you play into them as a mark
i can see whats coming next
i will be fighting for my very own breath.
im thrusted out into the cold
by the hands of your familiar.
turmoil arouses at the like of her hand.
i am not strong enough to hold onto this thread
i am an outcast in my world.
If you are going to turn on me,
then turn on my now
if you are going to leave me
leave before i get too fond
my heart was blocked and just began coming down.
Never should have let down the wall
that was my own mistake
one that i consistantly tend to make.
I thought i could not be strong without her
and yet i survived.
I guess this is just another time
I feel that i cannot be strong without you
but i know i'll be okay
i will survive it. My time, My way.
Im in a room with many
yet i feel so alone
screaming so loud
yet no one can hear me
no one can begin to know
Its a deathening silence
one that can kill and destroy
Thank you for pulling me to my feet at a time
and it hurts to lose you
You havent gone as of yet
but i know the future.
You will leave and i will go back home
a failure of my set goal




Copyright © drummerchic18 ... [ 2009-06-23 09:33:02]
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Re: Watch You Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 08:35:42 PM AEST
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Very beautiful in its sadness.....
Jenni


Re: Watch You Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 12:29:00 PM AEST
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I LOVE...very emotional...yet..true




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