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Unholy

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 02:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I honestly like what I have here. My only problem was in which order to put the stanzas because it sounds better in some ways then others. But this is what I came up with I hope you like it and if you think it should be in a different order please tell.

Unholy that’s what I am
A degenerate of the damned
I’m a lowlife no one wants to know
Where’s man like me to go

Straight down to hell
That’s where they tell me my soul will have fell
All because I’m not the same
All because they think I’m insane

They tell me I’m hell bound
That not even god wants me around
All because I’m not the same
All because they think I’m insane

So what if I don’t fit in
It’s not a sin
I’m proud
I’ll say it loud

Unholy is what you want me to be
I’m fine with that so I’ll show you and let you see
That I’m unholy that’s what I am
I’m a degenerate of the damned

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-06-23 02:10:58]
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Re: Unholy (User Rating: 1 )
by GlenDavid on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 03:14:12 AM AEST
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hey love this poem, dont let them change you keep following your own path and keep up with the writing!

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