|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
everywhere
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 02:26:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
|
poems;
as evening;
the solstice
moon casting
sepia haze
outside color
of not-quite
twilight.
as work;
man weeping
w/one foot
water/sap
boiling thick
syrup anger
pure rage.
as camping;
cool forest
confluence
of rivers
swallowed
by night.
as imagination;
taking flight
strange and
terrible bird
billowing
curtain ghosts
sounds of blue.
as dreams;
captured moth
in love with a
dragon china
teacups bobbing
downstream
lipstick-kissed.
everywhere
poems.
ming
6-21-09
11:41 AM
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-06-22 02:26:29]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: everywhere
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 04:57:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I really ike this. . . your words paint intriguing pictures. . . haven't seen sepia for a while.. nicely done. elle |
|
|
Re: everywhere
(User Rating: 1 )
by ATG on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 11:22:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I agree poetry is Everywhere, it can someitmes be overwhelming, I like they way its almost a worship of nature. Im going to read some of your other now. Peace |
|
|
Re: everywhere
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 02:48:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good imagery..Nicely done..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: everywhere
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 04:07:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is exceptional. Such a vast array of different images and metaphors for the reader to savour!
-Phil |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
