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Shattered Dreams
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 09:39:30 PM in AEST
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My first attempt at free verse. It's not what I normally write but I think it turned out alright I hope you like it
Shattered dreams
Fill my life
They are the ground that I walk
Crunching under my heel with each step
I try to piece them together
But then they just crack
Again shattering into smaller pieces
Never again to be found
Never to be realized
Never to be put together
Always to be shattered
To haunt me
With every step I take
Hearing the crunch of my dreams under foot
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-06-21 21:39:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shattered Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 12:29:19 AM AEST (User
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Great job, friend.
You go now.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Shattered Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 08:36:16 AM AEST (User
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i know how that feels. it hurts so much, i like it. keep on writing. |
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Re: Shattered Dreams
(User Rating: 1 ) by kro3291 on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 09:22:38 AM AEST (User
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dat's awesum......it makes my poem look like trash.... :P great job keep writin |
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