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~Strangers~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 05:09:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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~~xXx~~
Strangers..
That's what we are.
Nothing more, nothing less...
We share so much,
Yet we share nothing.
You spend your days with me,
I give you my nights.
But what do we really share?
We share feelings..
Feelings I can't describe.
My love for you has overtaken me
with feelings
you arouse in me.
Yet
your silence
weighs heavily..
It says so much to me.
Maybe that's how it should be.
But where
does that leave me?
Right here:
Right where I want to be.
Sharing your mornings,
Your feelings,
Your life.
I
Love
You
Stranger.
~~xXx~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2009-06-21 17:09:20] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 08:01:02 PM AEST (User
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Very creative, sweet write.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by razorbladekisses on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 11:35:32 PM AEST (User
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very nice:) |
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 05:42:59 AM AEST (User
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Simply elegant. |
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 08:40:31 AM AEST (User
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i love the emotion in this poem. keep on writing. i love it. |
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadwriter on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 09:41:11 AM AEST (User
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What a great write, and such a lucky stranger.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Strangers~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 10:49:49 AM AEST (User
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I see potential...keep writing. |
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