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The old guy who looks a bit like me...
Contributed by
GlenDavid
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Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 04:52:38 AM in AEST
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FamilyPoems
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Ive never got to see you as much as i should
I never new you as well as i should
Two people came together in the 70's
Made babies and had love they could feel
Things in time change, as all things do
Apart their lives were to head, seperation was the next turn
But every sunday i would get to see
My old man and his love for me.
I love you older me.
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GlenDavid
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2009-06-21 04:52:38]
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Re: The old guy who looks a bit like me...
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 21st June 2009 @ 04:50:36 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I am happy you still had a chance to know your father even through the separation. Nice write. |
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Re: The old guy who looks a bit like me...
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by ming on
Monday, 22nd June 2009 @ 02:37:26 AM AEST
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| I think you should capitalize all the 'I's'. It would read better. Keep at it. |
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