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The O in Alone
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:34:54 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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The obscurity,
one in an opaque ocean
overcoming me
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-06-19 12:34:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The O in Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:49:28 PM AEST (User
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it rolled off the tongue, nice work.
-Phil |
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Re: The O in Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 04:46:18 PM AEST (User
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perfect title. . . I love this piece. elle |
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Re: The O in Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by windowguy on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST (User
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Well written.
The image of the ocean is perfect for this deep emotion. |
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