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Will You Ever Notice Me?
Contributed by
Ember
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
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Will You Ever Notice Me?
I ask you everyday in many many ways... Will you ever notice me? You never answer... do you even hear me? Everyday I try to get a glimpse in your eye... but you never even see me. I try to tell you that I'm hear in all the ways that are most clear... but anytime I get too near you only walk away... so there I stand and try to understand why you won't notice me. I have no answer to that quesion... I hope someday I will... but for now I'll keep trying to be noticed by you... I whisper my sweet secrets to you in the summer nights gentle breeze... but you only shut your window to cut off the breeze... so I wait till mourning but you never wake... if only you would've noticed me... but now it's too late for you are gone you never even noticed me... I wish I could help you but I can't your're too far to reach... peace be with you but I know it won't because you never even noticed me... now that you burn and are tourtured you finally notice me... but like I said it's far too late... I weep now my tears of blood because I could not help you... but you have nobody to blame but yourself... because you never even noticed me... So now I ask you once again why couldn't you have noticed me?... I wish you would have so you wouldn't be in this pain for eternity... but the answer to that statement is you never even noticed me... so many people know my name they say it loud and proud... my name is Jesus... yes sirie... but you unfortunately like so many others never even noticed me...
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Ember
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by knowWhat_kind on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 10:45:21 PM AEST
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| Wow that was really good. When i read it the first time it was like wow. You need to write more poetry and put it on here, do you know who this is...yep its me your best bud Sarah. Love your work keep on writing it ok. |
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:47:08 AM AEST
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| This is a really good write...I loved it...i can see you have alot of talent and I hope you submit more poetry soon...xoxo |
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 07:01:49 PM AEST
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Hey Ember I read your poem and it's really good. I'm gland u finally decided to come check out the site, pretty cool uhh. Well just wanted to say that your poems great...and you should submit the other 2 u wrote cuz' there real good too...loves and hugs
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:51:37 AM AEST
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| WOW this is really good and long. |
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by gothgal on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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| hi,good poem with a very clever twist at the end,you never expect for it to be jesus and then it all seems so clear!keep it up! |
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Re: Will You Ever Notice Me?
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by EyesRustedShut on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 09:11:36 PM AEST
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| sweeeeeeeet poem..... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com |
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