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at a loss. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 09:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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what word to describe
a syllable of trust, lost
denied. . . for all time
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-06-18 21:20:09]
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Re: at a loss. . .
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by Roddy on
Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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Poems don't have to be long drawn out. Sometimes less means more in a poem. You usually learn more from shorter quotations then long obscure ones. The last poem I posted was just as long as this if not shorter.
Good Write
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Re: at a loss. . .
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 09:16:17 PM AEST
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Great poem. I love the complex simplicity of it if that makes sense. It is to the point but has depth to it.
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