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Hold thy tongue
Contributed by
mase
on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 04:33:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hold thy tongue,
Your fate is sealed,
You have no future,
Your past is lost.
Stay thy hand,
You have no place,
Your destined life,
Ends in disgrace.
Hang thy head,
Judgement has passed,
You move not forward,
A wall against your back.
Hold thy heart,
The final beats,
You've spent your last,
You lie in waste.
Hold thy tongue,
There is no reprieve,
Your final crime,
Your fate is sealed.
Copyright ©
mase
... [
2009-06-17 04:33:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hold thy tongue
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrokenSkin on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 05:23:47 AM AEST (User
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It depends if you want me to comment on the way you write, or what you write.
Everyone on here is speaking from the heart, so techinically judging poetry seems wrong.
I just like to say, how poerty makes me feel.
I can relate, so automatically, i like, but i can see theres more in you. You may write in all styles, and i will look through when i get the chance, but id like to see you write freely, no rhyme, i hope i can find something like that in your list of poems, to look deeper into u, because thats what poetry is to me, a window into the soul. |
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