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I am not okay.
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:19:08 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Everything seems dead;
I am under fate's control.
Life's cliff is tempting.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-06-16 14:19:08]
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Re: I am not okay.
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:54:10 PM AEST
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Hmm.. your title seems to sum up your poem quite nicely.
Do feel better.
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Re: I am not okay.
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 05:59:07 AM AEST
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Great write. I hope things come back to life soon.
Deadwriter
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Re: I am not okay.
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by JAMIEAG27 on
Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 02:50:49 AM AEST
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| although I'm not depressed all the time I usually write the best being very depressed so there I can kill myself figuratively not literally. Just venting mostly. Hopefully it's the same for you and I wish you the best in life! |
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