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Suicide Note Of a Lost Soul
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
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Monday, 15th June 2009 @ 08:10:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I fall too the floor as the dagger pierces my heart,
It's a word not a weapon thats torn me apart,
With one soul destroying word my world has come to an end,
A pain so raw inflicted by my one and only true friend,
The word rattles my head as i clench my ears,
Pain this agonizing doesn't bring tears,
I seen it in your eyes its time I moved on,
The love we once shared is feet under dead and gone,
I close my eyes and feel your embrace,
Its been so long I have a distorted picture of your face,
A bottle of whiskey and a dozen pills,
Will take me back too the land of a thousand thrills,
The end is here and the pain has gone as i fall face first into the snow,
Cause of death...the word 'no'
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2009-06-15 20:10:07]
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Re: Suicide Note Of a Lost Soul
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 15th June 2009 @ 09:31:38 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! It is so full of emotion. Great write! |
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Re: Suicide Note Of a Lost Soul
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 02:36:16 PM AEST
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| very deep..i feel the emotion through your word usage..look forward to reading more! |
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