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This Life So Surreal
Contributed by
Adielae
on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 07:55:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Put on my shoes
Walk around for a bit
See how it feels
To have your psyche take a hit
No one can know
Can anyone feel?
What it's like to be me
In this life so surreal
I stand in a fog
What's real? What's fake?
I take a step forward
Did I make a mistake?
I simply can't resolve
The mess in my head
"What's wrong with that girl?"
The doctors all said
I can't do it alone
I need you with me
Please open my eyes
Help me to see
Life seems so hopeless
With troubles galore
Should I simply quit?
Or stick around for more?
Copyright ©
Adielae
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2009-06-12 19:55:08]
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Re: This Life So Surreal
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:46:36 PM AEST
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What a great poem. I can truly relate to this. Great flow!
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Re: This Life So Surreal
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by girish on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 07:03:35 AM AEST
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| have hope and stick around *** Comment edited Self promotion is not allowed at YPDC. *** Moderator_18 September 26, 2009 |
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Re: This Life So Surreal
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 10:34:15 AM AEST
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a good write. i can see plenty of potential.
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