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A Pack of Joke
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 07:45:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A Pack of Joke
Drumming drops of rainwater,
Synchronizing heartbeat, stringing
loud are my thoughts, an acid rock
concert that rocked my soul
from within.
Celebration on its top, happy
faces everywhere,
gossiping women, bragging men,
giggling toddlers
in their midst stood me
staring blank as a plank.
“Cheer-up” was a call
from the rear, “it is your
Wedding-day” “is it?” was
my subconscious mumble, “or
was it” little they know
about the note she left
that said, “I found my dream;
leaving behind you,
”a pack of joke.”
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2009-06-12 19:45:53]
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Re: A Pack of Joke
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:07:55 PM AEST
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Nicely written, Franco...so sad..
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Re: A Pack of Joke
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by girish on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 07:11:21 AM AEST
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| seperation is unbeareable. *** Comment edited Self promotion is not allowed at YPDC. *** Moderator_18 September 26, 2009
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Re: A Pack of Joke
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by LindaMary on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 11:36:16 AM AEST
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Benedetto,
This poem bought tears to my eyes and I could feel the disconnection and disbelief the knife cut of words to a heart and soul.
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