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Lost Words
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 07:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Stars are dancing
In my eyes
As I search
The moon for you
The words I clearly think
Tip toe across my tongue
Just shy of finding their way out
How I wish
(upon a star)
That you could shrink
And walk right in
So that you could see
All that I mean to say
For my mouth
Can never find the words
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2009-06-12 19:09:10]
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Re: Lost Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:50:57 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I love this poem! You said it so well! There have been many times when I just couldn't find the right words. Great job! |
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Re: Lost Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 09:56:26 PM AEST
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I really like this poem.
I especially like this part:
How I wish
(upon a star)
That you could shrink
And walk right in
So that you could see
All that I mean to say
Take care and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Lost Words
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by girish on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 07:06:50 AM AEST
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| your mind has the words leave your expressions. nice write. |
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Re: Lost Words
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 10:36:10 AM AEST
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it had a nice fluency and a good structure, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: Lost Words
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th September 2020 @ 01:57:29 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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