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~***~ Dilemma ~***~
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am so lost, what do I do,
Do I choose her or do I choose you?
She’s so pretty with long blonde hair,
And legs that go from here to there,
But then again you’re soft and warm,
And cuddle close when there’s a storm.
How am I supposed to choose,
I know with either I can’t lose.
With her eyes of blue and pouty lips,
For a moment now the scale tips,
An image of time spent with her,
Seems right but still I am unsure,
For you can be the perfect friend,
To warm the heart with ear to lend,
You’d make the troubles disappear,
And give sweet hugs when you’re held near.
The choice is hard, oh what to do,
Do I choose her or do I choose you,
I could stay here thinking all the day,
But instead I think I’ll go this way.
I’ll take them both, who cares the price,
For me that answer’s rather nice,
For my daughter will like it most of all,
When she gets from me the teddy AND doll.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 09:12:33 AM AEST
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| Ah, you had me going there for a while Doug! Excellent write - flows so well, and I always love poems with a twist :)))) |
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 10:55:20 AM AEST
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I was just about to call you something very nasty before I read the last line. Great poem. Really like the twist at the end.
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 12:24:26 PM AEST
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AWWWWW!!!!!!This is so darn cute.
But,I can't relate,moms neverrrrrrr
have those dilemmas! j/k ;)
I loved it!!!! Thanks for the smile!!!!
Angel always ......Godspeed! |
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 04:32:23 PM AEST
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LOL! Love it!! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:20:37 AM AEST
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wordpoet
This "takes the cake" for optomism...........
but it's a cake I enjoyed. Great poem.
In Nelson's navy you could hoist three flags that signalled to another ship "You are standing into danger"...................
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by karoody on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 08:22:35 PM AEST
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I like this, lots of creativity. I see you really are wrapped around your girl's pinky!
Take care,
Kara |
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by Lia on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 12:09:40 AM AEST
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| ok ok..you got me on this one..how sneaky of you...shame on you for pullin one over on me while i'm tired...I like it though :)...the poem that is :P |
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by Pigglet on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:21:37 PM AEST
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awwwww, that is sooo sweet that you did that for her.you must be a wonderful dad and I'm sure she is glad to have you as one.
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Re: ~***~ Dilemma ~***~
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:18:32 PM AEST
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Wow,the ending sure surprised me !This was really cute,great poem !
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