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Shedding
Contributed by
Spike
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Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 04:42:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I found her in the Summer,
left her in the Fall;
walked away without regret,
not anything at all.
I saw her in the Winter,
passed her in the Spring;
sadness overwhelmed her
but I didn’t feel a thing.
maybe I am shallow,
possibly too cruel;
even worse to linger
in a dream no longer real.
I have been her in the mirror,
felt the blackness yawn;
cried until my eyes closed shut
regretting being born.
but Winter melts to Summer,
Autumn grows to Spring;
one day we put our hand to heart
and hardly feel a thing.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2009-06-12 04:42:03]
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Re: Shedding
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by kye on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 06:47:50 AM AEST
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*Applauds you!*
I liked the honest & rawness of this poem. It was eloquently written but felt very truthful.
I for one, can certainly relate to being on both ends.
If one has a heart, your poem certainly makes it feel...
Kie |
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Re: Shedding
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 10:42:21 AM AEST
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a fluent write, good work.
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Re: Shedding
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by elle on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 01:17:39 PM AEST
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I given up love balancing precariously upon my fingertips. . .
& I've died to myself over the loss of one I considered to be half my being. . .
no matter which line of love you cross, the pain is real.
I feel the last stanza represents best, the truth, that Time does indeed heal.
Nice one, Spike. :) elle |
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