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Disease
Contributed by
karoody
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Loneliness rips and tears my soul
My world is consumed in dark shadows
You can't see,
But it's gone up in flames...
This fire is cold
For it's hard to keep warm
Without the understanding of another
I'm tired of everyone telling me how to feel
Telling me how to react...
Walk in my shoes-
Now tell me-
Are you ready to throw in the towel?
I don't wanna die
Until I feel I've lived a life
And this isn't living
My heart and soul are empty
Growing colder by the second
All that I love
All that I care for
Has been stolen from my world.
I want out
Need a new existence
With much less pain
I am tired of being on the outside
Looking in
Watching the rest of the world
Through a dirty window
Watching the beauty as it is destroyed
Can anyone hear me?
Please listen, understand
Warm my soul once more
And rescue me from this foreboding darkness
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-28 07:05:00]
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Re: Disease
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 10:46:37 AM AEST
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I simply loved this poem. It is fantastic. Really amazing.
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Re: Disease
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:16:00 PM AEST
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| i completely agree - this is sadly so familiar, and i totally understand. your poem is so expressive, well done xx |
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Re: Disease
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:16:17 PM AEST
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| i completely agree - this is sadly so familiar, and i totally understand. your poem is so expressive, i love it xx |
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Re: Disease
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:47:23 PM AEST
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| This is so beautifully written I love it. |
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Re: Disease
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:21:43 AM AEST
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| ...I can understand you well.. .. this is one aspect of emotion that haunts so many.... with in heart of hearts every body is lonely.. peace and joy be with you..my dear girl.. venkat |
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Re: Disease
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 09:54:26 AM AEST
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| i hear u, i hear your crying and understand your diying.. set your eyes free and your heart will grow fresh like a tree.. don`t look in fear just let it be real.. terrible suffering brought in a wonderful and poetic body.. keep us warm with your words |
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Re: Disease
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by WordPoet on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 01:51:18 PM AEST
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Love the poem... Know it well.
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Re: Disease
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 09:57:08 AM AEST
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| i like this very much kara there's something that you put in your poem that makes them unique |
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