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~Believe In The Dream~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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~~xXx~~
Two separate lives is what they lead
Each other's love is all they need.
Thousands of miles apart they live
But to each other, strength they give.
Recollections of his hands on her hips
Or the way he looked at her taut nips.
Memories of when their mouths did touch
Still haunt them both so very much.
Stolen touches they both shared
Tender looks that showed they cared.
How she wished they’d had some time alone
But this secret of theirs must never be known.
He dreams of being able to explore,
She fantasizes about sharing so much more.
After being made to feel so alive
Without each other how are they to survive?
Yet they know they cannot cross the line
And on each other, they can never dine.
Still, they choose to believe in their dream
And hope some day to make each other scream.
~~xXx~~
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Jenni_K
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 09:54:43 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni how tantilizingly beautiful.
Without dreams no one would grow.......
Reality and everyone will know.
To feel so alive, and yet never realize
Tis a hard life to surmize.
I wish with all my heart..........someday............
somewhere...........your dreams will come true!
Warm love
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 01:25:22 PM AEST
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oh girlfriend,
this is awesome.
wow, this write jus leaves me speachless,
luv, huggs, blessing,
emy |
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by Willofree on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 05:46:53 PM AEST
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Jenni.
Alvery provocative poem which depicts a loot of passion. I love the line...where he dreams of being able to explore and show faniasize sharing so much more
What a interesting concett of pitting dreams against fantazeis,,,
Good Job
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 08:23:44 PM AEST
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A wonderful write Jenni, miles of separation or Barricades oceans cannot keep true love from blooming, and My friend and it is this "HOPE some day to make each other scream" for sure.
God bless you Jenni,
With lots oflove and respect,
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 11:10:43 AM AEST
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I confess to having not read your work in a while. This reminded me of why you influenced my poetry so much in my early period on this site. Your flow is just unmatchable, by anyone on this site. Each write is an education in how to be a poet. spectacular once again.
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 05:44:42 AM AEST
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Jenni,
You do know how to write to energize the soul. Beautiful work.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by CMark86 on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 03:51:04 PM AEST
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| I like it!! you can almost feel the tension of the two.. great write |
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Re: ~Believe In The Dream~
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by courtseb on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:19:49 PM AEST
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| How touching! Miles apart for so long, yet they still kept dreaming only of eachother and no one else. A true testimony of true love! Beautiful! |
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