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COLLECTIVE (SENYRU-HAIKU)
Contributed by
wellsmark
on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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LONGER (SENYRU)
Folk who cease smoking,
Do not add years on their life,
It just seems longer.
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SINGLE (SENYRU)
Be loyal in life,
Lousy palette in women,
Is better than no taste.
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JACK FROST (HAIKU)
A tang of frost,
Feather footed in passing,
Brook shines with luster.
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wellsmark
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2003-03-28 06:35:00]
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Re: COLLECTIVE (SENYRU-HAIKU)
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:56:17 PM AEST
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| These were good ... I especially liked the first two :)) |
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Re: COLLECTIVE (SENYRU-HAIKU)
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by banjo on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:41:56 PM AEST
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Very nice... I especially liked the last one. Feather-footed is a great metaphor for the frost.
What is Senyru? Is it different from Haiku? |
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