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ENUFF!!2
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 11:06:53 PM in AEST
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Oh no it ain't revenge we're after
Make no mistake it's time to pay.
The rocks you throw bounce right off.
Hold on to your lies, it's comming your way.
Lord, we've had enuff of his ignorences.
We've held it in too long but no more.
Our little girl will not be tortured again!
Soon the state police will knock on your door.
Hatred, anger for you is so easy to spread.
Luv has no place in your evil heart.
Drink your booze, do illicet sex games.
It's comming down from your black start.
Life could be beautifull if you'd try
But your past will haunt a long time.
When you hit the ground lifes cycle begins.
Every evil deed will flash in your mind.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 11:18:51 PM AEST
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Hi again
Sometimes anger gets the better of us for no reason-
Sounds like you have plenty of reason and I hope that everything works out and evil gets its just reward-
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:18:04 AM AEST
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Awww Hun, I know the need to vent sometimes... I hope and pray that things will sort themselves out soon ...
Love and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by redsleeve on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 05:21:04 PM AEST
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I've had my own feeling of 'enough is enough' lately. It always feels better to just get it off your chest. Just remember everyone gets what they deserve in the end. thanks for sharing.
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:42:23 PM AEST
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Em,
I so know and understand you here.
You captured the emotion well and with taste within this verse. Of course, no matter the subject, the pen always sings when it is you on the other end of it!
I know first hand what a helpless feeling and how the anger can surge in this type of a circumstance. I am still not completely "over" my last bout with something similar.
I will pray for you and the family.
I will also pray that justice comes swift for the assbite!
Hugs you tight
Michelle |
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 10:11:08 PM AEST
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My dear Emy,
Turmoil and strife...........I'm so glad you can vent among friends that understand where you're at!
I'm so sorry you have to suffer through such as he..............or whomever.........call the police first...........rid of him forever.
Love you little Emy
You're always in my prayers
Warm love
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th June 2009 @ 05:08:14 PM AEST
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| This is a strong and powerful poem. |
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 11:52:41 AM AEST
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Emy! Thank you for welcoming me back.
This is a very powerful write. I do hope all is well, or if not then on it's way to better.
I've missed you
much love,
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Re: ENUFF!!2
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 05:43:35 AM AEST
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Great piece
The lines
"Life could be beautifull if you'd try
But your past will haunt a long time"
really stuck in my mind and probably will for a long time
Steve
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