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Knife called lust
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 05:05:22 PM in AEST
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It’s the knife called lust
It won’t leave a wound just make your heart bust
It still cuts so deep
You’ll wish you could see blood seep
From every pore
So you would suffer this torture
I can’t see
A life with out you beside me
The knife cold against my skin
I can feel my heart race within
At the mere thought of you
What am I to do?
I have a knife called lust cutting into my veins
Causing me so much pain
And yet there is no blood from my pores
Just me living this life in torture
Just to adore you
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-06-10 17:05:22]
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Re: Knife called lust
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 07:40:25 PM AEST
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| What a great poem! I can so relate to this. I have felt this "knife" in my life! Great write! |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 02:06:26 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my dear friend.
It's sad but really well done.
Most folks more than likely wouldn't admit this but you have told it down to a t.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 02:06:28 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my dear friend.
It's sad but really well done.
Most folks more than likely wouldn't admit this but you have told it down to a t.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 02:06:30 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my dear friend.
It's sad but really well done.
Most folks more than likely wouldn't admit this but you have told it down to a t.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by theurbanpoet on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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| Fantastic Kelly! My favourite poem of yours...brutal yet beautiful...really like it keep it up! |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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| i c the point in this poem, n i think everyone agrees with you in this poem. i like this poem because i can relate to it. |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:12:09 PM AEST
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It's experiences like this that generally cause someone
to learn to not care anymore. |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by redsleeve on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 05:27:05 PM AEST
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wow! this is an extremely relatable poem and so emotive. one of my favorites. thanks for sharing.
red |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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Kelly,
I can relate to this write as well.
I loved how you compared the two, lust and the knife, two bladed sword stuff, oh yes tis true.
I hope you find balance and are not left in torture anymore though!! Good work, it is raw, hard hitting and full power.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Knife called lust
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by Loende on
Friday, 12th June 2009 @ 05:26:23 PM AEST
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Kelly, this is a very accurate look at what
has plagued the world of man since Adam
and Even got kicked out of the garden.
More wars have been fought, more men
have died and more mistakes have been
made, denying the lethal knife of lust. All
of us, if we're honest, have felt the kiss of
this particular blade. Great job.
Be well,
~Loende |
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