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Stay a bit Longer
Contributed by
Everlasting_Flame
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Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 11:59:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stay a bit longer,
im not ready for you to leave.
Hold me close to you,
and kiss me tenderly.
Dont leave so soon,
theres no need to rush.
Love takes time,
and time moves fast.
So stay a bit longer,
and love me for as long as you can
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Everlasting_Flame
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2009-06-10 11:59:01]
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Re: Stay a bit Longer
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 01:03:26 PM AEST
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This is beautiful...especially for a first write... Would love to read more from you...
Welcome to YPDC..
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Re: Stay a bit Longer
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by mase on
Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 03:59:38 AM AEST
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Short and sweet, a gentle piece.
keep up the good works |
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Re: Stay a bit Longer
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 04:35:07 PM AEST
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Nicely written.
-Phil |
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