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What Makes Me Laugh

Contributed by Darkmoons on Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 10:03:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

What makes me laugh.Is the never ending sorrow , lust,and hate.A dark fire which makes me shiver a moonless night.From which the night turns silent.A black hole in which all things are sucked in.Vanquished forever put into never endeing turmoil.

What makes me laugh.Is the peeks of the highest moutains.Beutiful they are.Ripe for the pick but cast aside for their majestic beuty and ruithless force.

What makes me laugh is like any other.From which any other would laugh at this life we live .Long and hard.Full of trials and tribulation.Yet soft and warming comforting and trusting life is a up and down elevator and for this i laugh.

What makes me laugh is this poem forced to come to life .Yet was never wanted.Tjis peom is a bastard ,fatherless in all i'm it's guidence.With a firm tap and a push and for this I laugh.

What makes me laugh iis the sunrise and the sun down the dark and the light open and closed.For life is repetitive and is the same in many ways.Yet to all it's anew fresh and pristine in all it's wonder but truly is and always was a degrading pile of flesh which is here today and will be gone tommorow for this is what makes me laugh.

What makes me laugh is life.Which is a symbol of new begining yet is always doomed to wither away.Life is ending from the day it starts .Dooomed to die before it was born.Life is the biggest laugh of all.It's grip holds all yet all embrace it's poisonus grip.Doomed like any next to them life is a shadow which goes away at sunrise and at sunset sucking the very life from you.Why do i laugh becouse life's a joke and im merely aplauding it's performance .All hold and embrace it and i rythm of it life's life and a laugh and what makes me laugh is life it's self.

Copyright © Darkmoons ... [ 2009-06-10 10:03:15]
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Re: What Makes Me Laugh (User Rating: 1 )
by Lydthon15 on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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I liked the imagery you used in the poem. It gives an intresting uplifting view on life

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