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Will she read this?

Contributed by 12345D on Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 01:12:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The best times of my life, and also the worst
Love is bliss, and love also hurts
Our love was so new and we were so young
The clouds and the fire, we walked among
We lost our little boy and everything changed
Our lives were shattered, never the same
As time went by we could talk about him
The light would shine, and then it would dim
There were plenty of rises and plenty of falls
But our love was everything, and you were my all

It started to slip and I could feel it go
I didn’t want it to change, you were all I did know
I accepted your deception, as you had mine
I tried to be okay, but things weren’t fine
The image in my head was all I could see
It was always us, but now there was you and then me
Things would be good, then things would be bad
One day I’d be happy and then the next day sad
I couldn’t let go and that’s why you did
I lost my heart, my soul, my very best friend

It didn’t take long for you to find him
I turned to alcohol as my new best friend
I woke up and cried, I felt so empty inside
I said I was okay, and that was a lie
As time passed I thought I’d never make it
You were my life and I wanted to take it
It’s now been 3 years as I sit here and write
So why in the world do I still think about you tonight?
We haven’t spoken in 2 years but not a day goes by
That I don’t think of you and miss you, and want to say hi

But you’re married to him and I need to let go
But how is that possible, I wish I did know
Everything we went through made me so strong
But I’m still weak when it comes to you, even after this long
I ask God why, why do I have to think about you?
But I never get an answer, and I still love you
I understand we will never again be
But I always thought it was supposed to be you and me
Most nights are fine, for the most part I’m good
But you’ve moved on, and I wish I finally could
I want to and try to I just don’t know how
I still miss you and love you and want you here now

Copyright Â© 12345D ... [ 2009-06-09 01:12:18]
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Re: Will she read this? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 21st March 2015 @ 04:33:45 PM AEST
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Very sad but I'm sure many of us can relate
I think it might be better in time but I wouldn't swear to it.

Hang tuff and know that you are not alone.
huggs, blessings,
emy

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