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~Stolen Moments~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 06:09:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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~~xXx~~
Subtle looks across the floor
Tantalizing touches, she desired more
Oblivious of everyone around
Lost in a moment not hearing a sound
Engrossed in each other as never before
Not knowing they’d be alone in the corridor
Meeting of their lips was all they both dreamed
Oh my darling, she silently screamed
Mesmerized by the love she now felt
Excitement rising below the belt
Never before had she been so alive
Temptation was now in full drive
~~xXx~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2009-06-08 18:09:50]
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by shelby on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 06:30:36 PM AEST
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Whewwww is it hot in here?
Dang it lady! This is hot hot!
Beautiful poem.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 07:12:26 PM AEST
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Awsome, emotions put into words as only you can, loved it, thanks my dear friend for the read.
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 07:34:21 PM AEST
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| Niiiiiiice...steamy hot! What dreams are made of! |
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 07:38:18 PM AEST
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| Also meant to say these kinds of poems seem to be your forte as you certainly do excel at them. |
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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Excitement rising below the belt
this one line though,
certainly sounds like a guy thing...
very good flow and easy to read, I like it a lot thanks for a good read and a memory of a loving moment.
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 08:52:58 PM AEST
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Now Miss Jenni that was some steamy writing.
Full Drive??? Driving to Temptation is ermmm fun?
Chow 4 now
~Bin~ |
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:15:55 AM AEST
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Jenni,
You do know how to keep an old heart beating... At times very quickly....
Great Write.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Stolen Moments~
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by redsleeve on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 06:38:53 PM AEST
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(catches breath) Smokin'! Great vision of this couple's passion. thanks for sharing
red |
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