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Throughout Time
Contributed by
CB
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Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 08:49:44 AM in AEST
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The Earth spins, grains fall,
Faces wither but loves stay strong.
Wrinkled fingers touch.
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CB
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2009-06-07 08:49:44]
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Re: Throughout Time
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 07:30:34 PM AEST
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Love the essence of this... If I had written it, I would have left out the "but"
The Earth spins, grains fall, (5)
Faces wither: loves stay strong... (7)
Wrinkled fingers touch. (5)
Just me...
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Re: Throughout Time
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by live_love_laugh on
Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 07:36:01 PM AEST
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| good write:) |
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Re: Throughout Time
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 8th June 2009 @ 07:48:09 PM AEST
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nice poem...wish there were more couples out there that match this description where love remains strong even throughout decades, great job! take care
-K.Z. |
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