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The Brightside
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 04:08:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I suppose there’s a positive
how else are we to know
the importance of love
without a broken heart
how else are we expected
to give ourselves so fully
until we know the gravity of it?
But excuse me if I fade
I’ll leave self-preservation
to those who have hope
who look forward to summer
I’ll not laugh for now
in this cold place
after my dawn died
I hear their clucks
I see them shaking their heads
”there’s someone out there for you”
”you are still young enough”
But I suppose there’s a positive
at least you once held me
and promised to be mine
at least I’ve learnt again
just how careful to be
with this damaged soul.
6/6/09
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Re: The Brightside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 05:01:04 AM AEST
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a good, solid poem.
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Re: The Brightside
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 07:25:31 AM AEST
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The bush that is pruned is the one that blooms best. Loss and pain are very much a part of love and when the time is right, you'll be back in that special place.
Very good job,
Keep it up!
Steve |
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