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I'm Comming
Contributed by
Kane
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The fires of hell is where I dwell,
Washed in blood, soul trapped in a cell,
Left for dead, filled with lead,
Death of the heart, but memories stay sharp,
Vision of death, bodies at rest,
Cold to the touch, with the tip of the blade I thrust,
Allow the warm blood to flow like a flood,
When my foes are begging at my feet, only then will the war cease,
Behold it's a new day, blood will spill, lives taken away,
A life feeled with sarrow, only made stronger by the pain of tomarrow,
Blinded by sin, anger builds within,
Will the pain stop, only when the last body drops,
A voice in my head, keeps telling me I'm dead,
Lost in darkness, a soul that's heartless,
Piece of mind, stolen by time,
Consumed by evil, forgotten by people,
A trip through ones mind, death not far behind,
Here I come don't try and run,
It's too late to hide, I'm already inside,
Say your prayers, and show your loved ones you care.
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-03-28 01:05:00]
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Re: I'm Comming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:23:46 AM AEST
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| death.. Angel!.. good for rest in the infinite dark ness..very cold.. but a talented write.. good luck.. venkat |
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Re: I'm Comming
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:52:26 AM AEST
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| always to the core and from the core of your heart, i love your dark poetry:) hugs nessa |
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Re: I'm Comming
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:07:43 AM AEST
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:>)
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Re: I'm Comming
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:51:21 PM AEST
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This is intense!!
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Re: I'm Comming
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:33:59 PM AEST
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| Your darness abounds...Great write. |
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Re: I'm Comming
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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| Deep & Dark But well written,Great write! Christina |
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Re: I'm Comming
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by karoody on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 06:00:27 AM AEST
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Kane,
This was a beautiful and moving piece of work. Your talent is amazing. You have a unique and strong style. Never stop writing, please.
Kara |
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Re: I'm Comming
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:34:42 AM AEST
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| With the flick of a split tongue, I smelled vengence in these words. Great piece, the visuals are more intense then a day spent with a vial of acid at Disneyland. Your creativity is immense. Keep it up. |
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