|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Bullet-Proof Bubble
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 08:13:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Iridescent spheres floating up to the clouds,
breathing life into bubbles is a simplistic pleasure.
Rainbow balls mystically floating in a crowd,
their life span is too brief to be measured.
Some break in a second; some last a while.
Crystal balls of the sky are never out of fashion.
Magic is enclosed in these bubbles of style;
Timeless bubbles are an artistic passion.
Bubbles seem to burst on contact,
but, in actuality, they are armoured by breath.
This breath blows immortality into the bubble's soul.
A bubble is bullet-proof because of its irresistible urge to reproduce more.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-06-04 20:13:30]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Bullet-Proof Bubble
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 08:40:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ahhhhhhh this poem made me smile.
I was thinking on getting a bottle of bubbles the other day just because, sighhhhhh.
Beautiful poem and filled with wonder and fun as well.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Bullet-Proof Bubble
(User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 08:41:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Great descriptions and creative. Reminds me of William Carlos Williams, I believe. He was a poet who tried to convey something simple intensely and in the moment to his readers. I believe you are doing so as well. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
