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Confusion in words
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
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Poetry in motion, come get lost in this ocean,
Word by word my thoughts form nouns, and verbs,
Crashing that waves, forceing my pen to be brave,
Writing from the heart, this jebberish I call art,
The words form a maze, I get lost in each and every phase,
The clouds are dark, but the light still burns in my heart,
Love in my eyes, but hidden by the mask I've growen accustom to with time,
True feeling never seen, emotions lost in a beauitiful scene,
Tears and fears combind in one, like a total eclipes of the sun,
Heartbreak and love one in the same, tis the phase, no pain, no gain,
Thoughts running free, someone please stop me,
My mind like a puzzle, my pen will never wear a muzzle,
More words clog my mind, I need to sleep, but who has the time,
Each poem I start, seals another crack in my heart,
Piece by piece they come together, forming a poem that will last forever,
I use the pen to write what I see, but she does what she wants in spite of me,
So I let her go, now she's happy fore she's in contorl,
Do as you will, write what you feel,
Snow covered mountians, as I drink from life's golden fountain,
From start to finish this poems been a blurr, that's why it's called confusion in words.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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Re: Confusion in words
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:05:34 AM AEST
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wow and wow!! this is stunning and my new favorite of yours! ooohh you really were in there-> this is so special:O
**write on**
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Re: Confusion in words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:16:49 AM AEST
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| your thoughts are taking the wings words and flying towards the snow mountain peaks even before you try to feed them with your nectar. a happy writer My dear friend. venkat |
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Re: Confusion in words
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:04:16 AM AEST
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First off, I love the title !!! This poem speaks volumes, but your words are never confusing... (just a bit mis-spelt) Ooops.sorry.. couldn't resist that....:>)
(Forgive me??)
Hugs to ya...
Jenni |
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Re: Confusion in words
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:37:54 PM AEST
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| Babe thisis a geat write it is even better in print than when you read it to me on the phone I still love it. |
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Re: Confusion in words
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:51:29 PM AEST
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| We all have confussion!Thats for sure,well said,Well Done! Christina |
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Re: Confusion in words
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:01:26 AM AEST
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Thanks guys, you making me blush. Thanks
The Phantom |
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