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Inside
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 04:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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The faint beating of a heart
is but a reminder
glossy lips and eyes
and the cruelty of words of a lifetime
you look at me bitterly
the curve of my hips, the shape of my mouth
silently lost in wonder
of how a girl like me could feel inside.
Screams on a playground
as you feel childhood slip away
love is the candle flame
inevitably burning out
So many times trying to run away
Always ending up in the same place
Holding hands become a memory
and less of a reality
An ocean of curls to get lost in
if you run your hands through her hair
Rounded, almond shaped eyes, warm, bright
a million stories flicker there in an instant
She responds to your touch, the song in the background
Hiding behind her eyes, she dies a little inside
Wrapping love in a box, kisses on the tag
I send it, I send it away
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2009-06-04 16:03:26]
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Re: Inside
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 07:15:47 PM AEST
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*sigh* We can never go back, can we? I like your style. So much yearning desire, hurt, memories in this.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Inside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th June 2009 @ 06:21:37 AM AEST
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yes, affection is so transient. I detected a wide array of emotions and concepts in this and it was more cerebral than the average rant at love. a cut above in my opinion.
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