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altered
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 01:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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stationary
perplexed
I long to fold
to close. . .
to envelope. . . nothing
touch everything
lightly. . .
& pass
to the nexus state.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-06-01 13:59:16]
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Re: altered
(User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on
Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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I'm in a very odd and very frustrating
mental place these days...and if
someone were to have told me that
they could explain how I was feeling
in 20 words or less, I would have had
to laugh at them...or maybe scream
at them. And yet... here are your 19
words and I couldn't have said it any
better myself. So, though it wasn't
written for me...I thank you.
Be well,
~dawn |
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Re: altered
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 05:48:40 AM AEST
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| And yet, it wouldn't be real there. Gentle breezes pass with a certain elegance. Upon returning she realizes, sighs, osmosis isn't what it's been amde out to be. |
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