Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 07:26:35 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Let the Beach Consume Me

Contributed by ell_03 on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 10:38:33 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Let the waves come up and over me,
Washing away the pain in my heart.
Let the tide pull me under and push me down,
Forcing the breath from my sobbing throat.
Let the sand cover me completely ,
Hiding the wounds which adorn me.
Let the salt wash over my eyes,
Tearing from them the tears I've cried.
Let the sun beat down upon my head,
Erasing the memories of what's been done.
Let the kelp entangle my legs,
Keeping me from running away.
Let the beach consume all that is me,
Killing me, Stealing me, Destroying me,
Saving me.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2009-06-01 10:38:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Let the Beach Consume Me (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 02:09:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Your poem was intensely visual and very dramatic.

I think as a reader my heart wanted to somehow save you. There is an enormous amount of pain that reverberates from your poem.

It is a very powerful piece.

Kie

Re: Let the Beach Consume Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 07:04:51 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great imagery!! Well done
Jenni

Re: Let the Beach Consume Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 07:13:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I enjoyed this one a lot. Those feelings of wanting to be taken away from the pain in life are something I very much relate to. I loved the beach and the various elements of the beach as a way to convey your pain. Well done!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com