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If Only
Contributed by
TundraHydra
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm sorry I didn't stop him when I had the chance
It's my fault he gave another person a second glance
I could have saved a life from his corruption
Instead he struck again causing destruction
I was too scared to speak up and say something
Could one forgive me for doing almost nothing
Sure everyone understands and forgives me
But I can never and will never forgive me
Because of my inaction
He caused a great reaction
He hurt me and it should have stopped there
What he did to me and others just wasn't fair
It took away my childhood and brought down another
My anger fills me to think that I once called him brother
Hatred boiling over like a lethal poison
If only I can stop him before he stikes again
I want to pour into him my hateful lethal injection
I want him to suffer like he has made others do
He did thing without thinking what his actions really did
God knows if I had a chance
I would have killed him when I was a kid
If only he could have known what he was going to create
A person so crazy and blind with hate
Would he have done the same thing over
It's like looking for a four leaf clover
One won't find the plant
And he would still see my life as insignificant
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Re: If Only
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:40:58 PM AEST
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a very good write with much emotion. well done. the pain you've endured is terrible. hang in there. stay strong.
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Re: If Only
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:11:46 PM AEST
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No one should have to suffer as you did. But you are a survivor and can come out stronger. Believe in yourself.
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Re: If Only
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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Such emotion. Well done. Hang in there. Your writing tells me your a strong person.
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Re: If Only
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 03:22:37 PM AEST
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HI TUNDRAHYDRA,
AM SORRY THIS HAPPEN TO YOU,BUT YOUR WRITING IS WONDERFUL.
THIS IS AN EYE OPENNER,YOU EXPRESS YOURSELF FROM THE HEART.
AM SO SORRY IT TO A FARMILY NEMBER WHO DID YOU WRONG.REMEMBER ITS NOT YOUR FALT
IT IS HIS.THANK YOU FOR THIS. |
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